Wednesday, May 31, 2017

The Best Kiss Comments

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Kissing,
Your soft lips gently,
Then was,
The best,
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Md. Ziaul Haque
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Rajnish Manga 31 May 2017

Thanks for a wonderful poem shared with the readers in a brand new format. Congrats for this innovative verse. I think the first and the last word do not rhyme in the true sense of the word as was required according to your own yardstick (Hissing or missing would have been proper rhymes) .

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Md. Ziaul Haque

Md. Ziaul Haque

Sylhet, Bangladesh
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