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and you have proved it alot and thats why i love to read your poems.....another marvellous write kamran bhai...thanks for sharing many, many 100'ssss rgds asif

good impressive write to impress someone you want out there...the title speaks volumes on the write as a whole...10

very impressive this is a great poem, very well structured I wouldn't change a thing except possibly some minor grammatical errors