Thursday, November 30, 2017

The Bequest Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went to see my friend today, she's dying and soon will
pass away,
She's looking tiny in that bed, can hardly breathe but
this she said,
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Chris Embrick 02 December 2017

Dreams always wait on the dreamer to take the first step. We often waste the best adventures of life by not taking a leap of faith. This poem is both inspiring and has a touch of melancholy. It reminds me of being in the room when my mother died. I'm sure she never got to live all her dreams. Thank you for the lovely write. 10+++++ for the poem, the tears are mine.

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Lodigiana Poetess 02 December 2017

Dreams sometime are best kept as dreams and at othertimes grasped- your mother may not have lived all her dreams but for sure part of her dreams would have included you and you were there when it was most important to her Chris.Hope you find the inspiration in this poem helps - and thank you for your kind words-peace and light always dear Poet xx

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Ravi Kopra 30 November 2017

Good line -I should have spent up my last dime, ‘cause now I'm gone -I won't have time,

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The Crow 30 November 2017

Nice one, excellent rhyming.10

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 November 2017

Thank you 'Sir/Madam Crow' (Maybe I could call you TC?) loving your comments and thrilled you enjoyed it- thank you! xx Lodigiana

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2017

Awakening. We know we are doing so wrong but we just keep doing it. A wonderful write of death yet oozing with life! Thank you and good luck on your journey.

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 November 2017

Thank you so much Lyn! ! it's a journey of discovery isn't it? lets make the most of it though! ! ! Thank you so much for your lovely comments -really appreciated! xx Lodigiana

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