Saturday, October 26, 2019

The Bells Will Chime An Hour Earlier.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

To Whom This May Concern.....BTW you can sleep one hour longer.
the bells will chime an hour earlier....

this earliest,
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2019

So amazingly and in friendly manner backyard door by the morning breeze. This was an amazing act to witness in life. You have recalled the long way of Autumn journey beautifully. A great imagery of perception is released. From Saturday midnight to Sunday morning dew dazzled a lot to motivate mind. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2019

A wonderful and lovely poem. Very informative as well. The first stanza has been woven with superb imagery and so melliflous when read. Liked reading it. On to my Poem List....10++

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Susan Williams 26 October 2019

the wind was still friendly, - - - - - - > the fiery Fall still has miles to go, .... I enjoy your word choice, an important talent for a writer, and alliteration always has me leaning in. The title caught my eye as well. Well done, my poetic friend! 10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 October 2019

Thank you so much, dear Susan, for your sweet comments and precious compliments. It´s been such a long time you had come by, I am happiest that you are doing well. Your responses and visit are most appreciated. May God Bless you a thousand fold.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2019

A beautiful narrative poem is well executed bearing a title " The Bells Will Chime An Hour Earlierle" Thanks for sharing with Poet's Note.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 October 2019

Thank you so much for your constant support and valuable visits. Your honest comments are most appreciated and respected, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God´s Blessings be greatest for you and your beloved épousse.

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