*the Beginning Of A New Political Leader - A Humour Comments

vow! what a drama. what a slang you have devoloped. the little show of power strugle is apparent.nice and entertaining.good and amusing a 10+++ from me love surya

politics is a so stupid.......

great piece, i laughed so much. vivid images and choice of metaphors and words- well crafted, delightful, with a message. goes to my favlist 10++ Mamta

a great humor, an awakening one..in a very poetic lines.. this piece shares a lot...lots of lessons very meaningful... 10++++

poetic humour in a very meaningful craft....fabulous write....10

it sparked humour with your skills. shan

Amazing humor with ummph!

Hi! It is refreshing.At least you have succeeded to make others laugh for a while heartily and happy.We need humour to ease out our burden.Please keep it up and do refresh us.If time permits, have glimpse on the poem'Sacrificial Lamb'.

Very nice satire. Hats off to your efforts to write the whole incident to pile up humor. Great job.

There is humor. I got it but the prose order of the poem takes away my patience. Let us properly understand that this is a fast world and people have no time to devote on others. Let us chisel into finer structure of poetry and to less number of lines. Otherwise, I don't find any difference between prose and poetry. Let us try to learn the art of versification in a better way. By keeping the central idea in tact, we can actually restructure any given poem. Thanks.

haha! ! superb narration

An interesting dig at the politicians of the day. CP

A humour well said in lighter veins.

An interesting piece of political satire.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

Politics is usually the best party - FOOD, WINE, BEER, MUSIC - Read my poem AMERICA POLITICO

Thanks a lot for these lines SL...I can not simply controll my laughter....with regional flavour of Esaki...excellently penned

Very good portrayal of a politician's rise, samanyan, filled with humor and wit throughout this fine poem. Indian political campaigns are a little different than American campaigns, but in the end, they bring much the same results! Carl.

Sadly true the rise to power of those who are quite simple in spirit and in mind..yet are purported as being great..though greatness resdies in all of us..delivery of our greatness is another thong..I enjoyed reading.

Dear Ssamanyan, It's a good satire depicting the class of leaders and followers we are having in the present day circumstances told more as a story than as a poem. still it's a good depiction of politics.Thanks for sharing.-Rajkumar

Nice story of poor Esaki becoming Kodi Eedaiyan by a politician due to politics of money!