The Beginning
Butterfly wings beat against the window pane
Only silence follows the sound of the rain
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Wow! The beginning with "Butterfly wings" then the building anxiety " The air in the room smells like stale truth".. and finally the pleasant and soothing (or should I say exhilarating?) revelation! Amber /Sara Anne, you know how to tell a story! (Contd)
Thank you so much i put a lot of work into these 3 poems. They are my favorites as well. I wanted to build the suspense slowly. I am glad you liked them. Have a great day.
Part 2. You know how to keep the reader on tenterhooks! Loved it. Top score