Thursday, June 9, 2022

The Beginning Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Beginning

Butterfly wings beat against the window pane
Only silence follows the sound of the rain
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Amber Piercy
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Part 2. You know how to keep the reader on tenterhooks! Loved it. Top score

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Wow! The beginning with "Butterfly wings" then the building anxiety " The air in the room smells like stale truth".. and finally the pleasant and soothing (or should I say exhilarating?) revelation! Amber /Sara Anne, you know how to tell a story! (Contd)

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Amber Piercy 11 July 2022

Thank you so much i put a lot of work into these 3 poems. They are my favorites as well. I wanted to build the suspense slowly. I am glad you liked them. Have a great day.

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