Monday, August 28, 2017

The Beginning Comments

Rating: 5.0

He came in on a sunny day
Complete and charming devil may
All tousled and disheveled stood
Atop his fortress
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Dawn Novus
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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

One always is led by ones secret heart... Nice love story

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Thomas Plotz 26 September 2018

Tousled ruffian looking man; took you by your gentle, tender-hearted hand; so began spinning tales, yet stories were so true. - Thank you Dawn Novus - Great first poem, sorry it took me so long to get back to your work. Thanks love

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2017

Of my hearts desire! ! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Midnight. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 28 August 2017

Well written and heartfelt. A very passionate piece. Thanks for sharing.

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