The Beginning Comments

A wonderful depiction of how it feels to be in love and how it relates to time. Well done, Sujata! Brian

Sujata.... I really did love the way you went on and buit up the base of the poem to gradually explain the theme with so much of thoughtfulness. A very effective writing and an interesting read.

and life goes on! ...the whole week with its own emotions attached to it...nice write about longing and togetherness...love...nalini