The Beggar Girl Comments
Rain-drenched, shivering,
trembling, she is standing
by the road-side.
Harassed like a wet
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A touching one........ Loved how she carries a storm inside her....... A leaf at the mercy of winds, a powerful verse indeed my friend..........!
I am sure you have got the heart of an angel. It really makes sad to see a child working or a girl begging. A very touching piece that says a lot in few lines.10/10
A moving picture! A boat adrift on stormy seas... a leaf at the mercy of winds and a storm brewing inside! ! Simple but powerful!
a rain inside - wow! simple yet powerful choice of words. :)
you wonderfully ended your poem, i love it, i love more the following line ''A leaf on the mercy of winds''...a nice poem indeed! 10
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7/28/2025 8:30:56 PM # 1.0.0
We don't know how many people are shattered from inside by the cruelity of storms breaking inside them!
Kind thanks Hira for nice words