Sunday, February 12, 2006

The Beetle Comments

Rating: 5.0

A cocky little crawler is the beetle on parade
his hardened shell dwells down upon his creepy little legs
and varnish smooth his body moves between the rocks and gnomes
he trundles over twigs and grass but skates on paving stones
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Charles M Moore
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Esther Leclerc 18 July 2006

I still love watching bugs n' spiders! Cute write, Charlie. Esther : ]

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Patricia Gale 01 April 2006

Yes to fly aware when danger appears. A buggy little write, but so cute. Patricia

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Ernestine Northover 12 February 2006

Hey that a cute one Charles. I love poems about insects they are such interesting characters. I wrote on called 'The Proposal' all about insects if you fancy a read, it's a fun one. Loved reading this. Thanks Love Ernestine XXX

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Charles M Moore

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