Friday, September 7, 2018

The Bee And The Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked away from the rose,
leaving it to glow and grow.
I have no regrets whatsoever
Yet the hurt loiters with tears
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M. Asim Nehal
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Martinez Salotori 21 July 2024

Marvellous poem.

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Suzon Albert 31 August 2020

Sacrifice never go in vain. And to sacrifice is the greatness of humans 10

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Freni Karaluthara 22 February 2019

I walked away from the rose, leaving it to glow and grow. what a beautiful expression.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 September 2018

Let rose grow and glow with light, beauty and fragrance. In autumn bliss, love is interestingly wrapped. Price of love is paid in deep love. A sweet sensation this poem gives is very interesting. An outstanding poem on nature is well penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thank u so much for your generous comments, Sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2018

I came across this poem through the endless advertisements right at the end of a poem I read. The title drew me to visit this poem. A poignant yet beautiful poem. Yes, in life we have to do things knowingly and that our heart must endorse it willingly. Well crafted and executed write....10 Sorry, the endless advertisements have deprived me to exercise my write to vote for this marvelous poem.

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2018

Thanks Rose, I appreciate your comments and understand how difficult it is to rate, your reading is more than your rating.

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Aqua Flower 08 September 2018

Truth is always the way to go whether it is painful or not. This is a lovely piece full of the emotions that love and loss brings. Suffering will pass and new love will be embraced! Nice poem!

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2018

Thanks much Aqua...

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Rajnish Manga 07 September 2018

Transparency brings satisfaction in life because of no duplicity. Thanks, Asim ji. Pleasure, satisfaction, and gratitude I am happy that I was not pretentious

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2018

Thanks Much Shri. Rajnish ji

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2018

I feel something has gone wrong in this web site, there are too many advertisements and the rating part has gone away , which is not reachable....

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Rajnish Manga 07 September 2018

Yes, you are right. No end to ads.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2018

A beautiful poem on living one's life in his own way. 'As I cannot suffer alone for the rest of the day I searched something else as my prey This is neither a tribute nor a self-punishment. Only a wish to live and see more rose like this again. '...is really very nice.10+++

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2018

Thank u so much for your appreciation...Anil ji

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