Wednesday, June 15, 2022

The Becoming Comments

Rating: 4.0

The Becoming

There's nothing like rain on an old tin roof
That can stir up the smallest truth
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Amber Piercy
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Mark Heathcote 25 June 2022

Nice last stanza brings it all home well.

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Amber Piercy 11 July 2022

Thank you very much i am glad that you liked it. Have an amazing day! ! !

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It is quite important to a life of our own. And "make peace out of life's beauty". To understand that Life is beautiful, we have look around us more often. Good poem. Full of positive energy. Positive thoughts. Top score

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Amber Piercy 16 June 2022

I sometimes find my head in the clouds when it comes to life. And writing helps me come back down to Earth. I also feel like slowing down is important and stopping to smell the roses once in a while is also good for you. Thanks for enjoying my work and as always have a fantastic day! ! ! ! !

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