Friday, March 28, 2014

The Beauty Of The Truth Comments

Rating: 4.9

A smooth, round pebble thrown with joy into a Killarney lake,
Creates movement of dancing ripples that reflects the light of the day,
Like the film of their lives, beginning with the first take,
My mother's moist, brown eyes scattered with flecks of green,
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Hazel Durham
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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2022

A compassionate creation with vivid images of love and happiness. Lovely and very passionate.

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A travel down the memory lane, with love and colourful images. Enjoyed reading this old poem, yet again.

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Rebecca Isbister 13 April 2022

Beautufull

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2020

Truth is smooth, pleasant and beautiful. Once we feel it our life becomes meaningful. Stars cannot go outside of this law. Love is natural truth too. This poem is penned with much brilliance. Reading this times again I feel very happy! ..5 stars..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

Truth is ever powerful and it has own dignity. Truth motivates life with beauty of nature. Truth has wings of freedom and righteousness. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Sarah Shahzad 11 December 2019

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Denis Mair 14 November 2019

Without the SWEEPING AND WEEPING of history weathered, perhaps you couldn't have felt the freedom they won or captured such beauty in truth. // I too am captivated by beauty that belongs to the fabric of life. I invite you to read my prose-poem THE PREMISE OF BEAUTY..

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

To observe the sheer beauty of the truth, All part of our roots, With their hearts joined forever in such bliss, Like their everyday wish, ..... // superb writings here in this new born leaf in this new born flower in this new born butterfly in the new born human child is hidden the beauty of truth where thinker discover own path of walking ahead to the world horizon........///

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C F 03 March 2019

A very nice write for your loved ones, I specially liked your lines: Sweeping and weeping, To observe the sheer beauty of the truth, All part of our roots, With their hearts joined forever in such bliss Thank you very much for sharing. I have heard and read words of wonders about The Ring of Kerry and Killarney!

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 10 January 2019

great! diction is very melodious and apparent. *beauty is truth-truth beauty ye know on earth, and ye need to know.

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Prabir Gayen 15 December 2018

Fantastic poem...........

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

very good poem.................................................

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Robert Murray Smith 15 July 2018

A poem that holds time in one's hand. The truth is there. Beautifully crafted.+++10 Robert

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Akhtar Jawad 30 June 2018

Truth is God and God is beauty. (Satyam Shivam Sunderam-Bhagvad Geeta)

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 April 2018

I love the way you presented the delicately written poem on Beauty and love. I would love to quote....Even the stars couldn't outshine their hearts glow, Like the constant, winding river of life in it's endless flow, The sound of their voices still carries across the wide expanse, Of heaven and earth, All part, Of our loving inheritance, 10+++++

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Houda Boukassoula 29 December 2017

I loved the wonderful lines with the touching, vivid imagery about love, memories, life and the beautiful truth

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Feipeng Shang 02 November 2017

With wings of freedom of flight, Throughout each night Beautifully expressed...10!

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Richard Wlodarski 21 August 2017

Hazel, the truth is there's such great beauty in every line of your poem. The imagery is so vivid. The words so very well chosen. The emotions so passionate. A beautiful ode to your parents. A joy to behold.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

Beautiful poem on love and life having thrilling expression. Touching write.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 June 2017

youn are a born poet tree

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