A smooth, round pebble thrown with joy into a Killarney lake,
Creates movement of dancing ripples that reflects the light of the day,
Like the film of their lives, beginning with the first take,
My mother's moist, brown eyes scattered with flecks of green,
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A travel down the memory lane, with love and colourful images. Enjoyed reading this old poem, yet again.
Truth is smooth, pleasant and beautiful. Once we feel it our life becomes meaningful. Stars cannot go outside of this law. Love is natural truth too. This poem is penned with much brilliance. Reading this times again I feel very happy! ..5 stars..
Truth is ever powerful and it has own dignity. Truth motivates life with beauty of nature. Truth has wings of freedom and righteousness. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10
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Without the SWEEPING AND WEEPING of history weathered, perhaps you couldn't have felt the freedom they won or captured such beauty in truth. // I too am captivated by beauty that belongs to the fabric of life. I invite you to read my prose-poem THE PREMISE OF BEAUTY..
To observe the sheer beauty of the truth, All part of our roots, With their hearts joined forever in such bliss, Like their everyday wish, ..... // superb writings here in this new born leaf in this new born flower in this new born butterfly in the new born human child is hidden the beauty of truth where thinker discover own path of walking ahead to the world horizon........///
A very nice write for your loved ones, I specially liked your lines: Sweeping and weeping, To observe the sheer beauty of the truth, All part of our roots, With their hearts joined forever in such bliss Thank you very much for sharing. I have heard and read words of wonders about The Ring of Kerry and Killarney!
great! diction is very melodious and apparent. *beauty is truth-truth beauty ye know on earth, and ye need to know.
very good poem.................................................
A poem that holds time in one's hand. The truth is there. Beautifully crafted.+++10 Robert
Truth is God and God is beauty. (Satyam Shivam Sunderam-Bhagvad Geeta)
I love the way you presented the delicately written poem on Beauty and love. I would love to quote....Even the stars couldn't outshine their hearts glow, Like the constant, winding river of life in it's endless flow, The sound of their voices still carries across the wide expanse, Of heaven and earth, All part, Of our loving inheritance, 10+++++
I loved the wonderful lines with the touching, vivid imagery about love, memories, life and the beautiful truth
With wings of freedom of flight, Throughout each night Beautifully expressed...10!
Hazel, the truth is there's such great beauty in every line of your poem. The imagery is so vivid. The words so very well chosen. The emotions so passionate. A beautiful ode to your parents. A joy to behold.
Beautiful poem on love and life having thrilling expression. Touching write.
A compassionate creation with vivid images of love and happiness. Lovely and very passionate.