Thursday, October 11, 2012

The Beauty Of The Pond Comments

Rating: 4.5

I see a frog bouncy as a ball,
bouncing up and down,
dancing like a clown.
I see the lotuses on top of the lily pads as beautiful as ever,
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Aminah Abdul Rahim
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Aminah Abdul Rahim 12 October 2012

From The Poet To Yoonoos Peerbocus: THANKS! It was certainly a short poem but I think it is good don't you? I bet you do! Well I hope you do as I want to do the best I can! If you don't well, it's ok.Thanks for the comment.YOU'RE THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!

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