Monday, December 30, 2013

The Beauty Of Simplicity Comments

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Your Simplicity
Makes you more beautiful
Than the most beautiful
Melody of your voice
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Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar
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Rajendra Rout 22 September 2017

Your Simplicity Makes you more beautiful Than the most beautiful Melody of your voice Is melodious than Any instrument can Ever play Your eyes glitter More than Any diamond ever seen Your face shines More than Any ornament ever worn Your mannerisms Mesmerizes every eye Your smile Captivates every heart You are the beholder of Pious beauty There is no desire To make you physically mine I wish you be Permanently embossed In the depths my heart Offer my prayers to you As my god.wow¡¡¡ what a beautiful poem

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Roseann Shawiak 16 January 2014

You've achieved total simplicity in this poem, it comes across generously, touching my soul. Very well written, I love it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 December 2013

Beautiful poem. This poem itself is flowing with Simplicity that it will touch ones heart. Good write from your pen.

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