Tuesday, June 9, 2009

The Beauty Of Misery Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey!
My little sparkling eyes
Untainted dreams of innocence
Sleep my tarnished hopes
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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This touches the soul Kamran. There are deep and meaningful messages here and the sadness is overwhelming. Crafted by a master! 10 Karin Anderson

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Aijaz Asif 20 June 2009

a very moving and painful write Dr. Sahib....' Homeless in my own Homeland ' and this is the biggest misery of the universe, just coz of greed of some has put the wrath on entire race.....thanks many, many 100'ssssssssssssssssssssss for this marvelous piece rgds asif

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Giselle Joseph 09 June 2009

Beautiful piece I sense the displacement and sadness throughout.

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 June 2009

Beautiful and Sad, brilliant choice of words a very creative poem

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Joseph Poewhit 09 June 2009

The words touch on many points

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Catrina Heart 09 June 2009

The surges of my juvenile blood Hold on my beauty of mind Stop this killing of your own flesh Handsome blood of our youth Playing in the scorching sun Singing the melodies of unwanted pain Kissing the lips of unseen misery -------- Well expressed thoughts...lovely meaningful poem written..........10+++

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