The Beauty Of Dreams Comments

that was deeep man soooo cool

i like your poem it remaind me...well i guess everyone will edentified with your poem....is really nice n yet kind of sad. Nice job writting feelings though... ;)

Hi Alex its a good poem. Very interesting. Yours Turly: Amanda Shelton

Hi Alex I Cherish these lines of Urs though they need a little more distinct mature taste ok? Cheers. The Sage.. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

A nice effort. It's nice to see you working in a traditional sonnet form. You might change 'you' to 'your' in the first line though, and 'doth' comes across as too archaic, not in keeping with the contemporary language of the rest of the poem.

Like the others say this is a very compelling read....10

A wonderful piece full of meaning.

Ponderous and fascinating...I love the last two lines especially. Keep it up! Caroline

AGAIN, YOUR TALENT IS SHOWING! VERY GOOD. BEAUTIFUL CONCEPTION. CAROL

Lovely lines; Well done. I may have preferred some kinds of stanzas or couplets to really bring out the beauty of the work.

I like this poem. very well done.

A wonderful poem indeed. Keep it up.

Very nice poem...so passionate..Great Job

a nice narrative composition... Ency Bearis

Fine composition indeed! style of expression nice! 10+++

What a beautiful prose with a touch of poetry.Thanks to the rhyming.Well, dreams were said to be the mind game but the truth is yet to be revealed and the beauty of it is when your dreams did materialized, in a form of reality.Nice writes Steen.