Monday, August 24, 2009

The Beauty In Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was just a baby
you left me
all alone
no one to hold
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Tori Fleck Fournelle
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Jen Capaldi 07 September 2009

Tori, your self confidence seeps through every words written on this poem. keep your strenght and know that you are beautiful and that it is thier loss not yours as odd as it may seem to say, because despite what you have gone through, you have grown up strong and smart, beautiful and empowered. and the only one that can take credit for that is YOU. very good write, sad to read, but let the pen be your guide. and know that you are loved and appreciated by others. take solace in thier company. Jen

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Tyease Collins 06 September 2009

Aww this seems so much deeper than your typical poems. Wow...this was wonderful -Ellie

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