Sunday, May 11, 2014

The Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.0

When the beauty subsides
And fades behind the mask
That keeps us shielded from the world
Blinding me from where I'm suppose to be
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Caleb Gonzales
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A short yet captivating poem. I liked it.

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Katelin Taylor 19 May 2014

Love it. I like the concept of separating the heart from the soul and that second line as well. Short but meaningful.

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Beautiful! so deep and meaningful

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Caleb Gonzales

Caleb Gonzales

Bakersfield California
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