The Beautiful Maiden Comments
I left a place like oven
That got my tongue cloven
It was a cosmic travel
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This is so brilliantly crafted and words so melodious I am speechless, very well scripted 10++
all physical travelings become fatigue and tired but the traveling of poetic mind is unstoppable; no fatigues can touch it; realistic, natural, spiritual, imaginative travels can make a poet celestial delegate to anywhere of the world, to seen and unseen places; this poem so beautifully and romantically delineated this theme
Her heart enveloped in my heart Like a precious stone enclosed in the earth.......full of beautiful simile in this poem; excellent poem penned through the exquisite imagination; pleasurable to read this; congrats for being selected this poem again as POD
Me Poet Yeps Poet says On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden urrr ssoooooolucyyyy even in heaven u meeet women take some condom
On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden urrr ssoooooolucyyyy even in heaven u meeet women take some condom
'On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden' - Oh! That's a good thing to happen!
' Smile for me maiden, let your smile make my earth heaven' A stroke of class from a creative savvy mind. Lovely piece
Her presence is like a safe haven Her beauty like that of heaven This is so nice
A wonderful love poem with a quite flow of tender emotions. The best lines I quote , " Her heart enveloped inn my heart Like a precious stone enclosed in earth" . Congrats on poem of the Day.
Congratulations on being chosen for Poem of the Day. Such a sweet and loving poem!
" Her lush voice hushes my fear Her smile halts my tears" nice
My heart is as big as the earth! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A nice poem on love with a very soothing flow and gives a good feeling. 'Her heart enveloped in my heart Like a precious stone enclosed in the earth'.. is awesome. Congrats on being chosen as poem of the day.
Her heart enveloped in my heart Like a precious stone enclosed in the earth - - - - - -A sparkling poem of love- - -Congratulations for the Poem of the Day!
A marvelous poem of the day. Congrats, Michael on your featured piece...10+++
Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
maiden the maiden the beautiful maiden just on the street of heaven .............//// beautiful dedication to Glory Oluwabamidele
Fill my heart with thy glory And all shall be hunky-dory Nice rhymes that compliment the name to whom it is dedicated -Glory. You are a great poet Michael
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7/25/2025 10:20:56 PM # 1.0.0
A funny narrative poem with fantastic imagery. Thanks.
Me Poet Yeps Poet(8/27/2020 2: 44: 00 PM) On the street of heaven I met a beautiful maiden urrr ssoooooolucyyyy even in heaven u meeet women take some condom(Report) Reply