The beautiful dream
Wednesday,2nd October 2019
I feel pain
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On approach we get some joy and sometimes we feel pain. But we do not bother about. We should proceed ahead with great dream and vision. An excellent poem is very well penned.10
A very thought provoking poem, IF I may say, but truly and sweetly rendered. In realizing a good ans happy life in society there must never be any difference in class form, whatever you have written an excellent poem in end rhyming and content. A 10 Full Score, Hasmukh Sir!
life is not clearly visualized but utilized in the best possible way and go away with fruits of it Hasmukh Mehta Courtesy: RAVEN TOTEM 2 .poemhunter/has, ilj-amathalal/
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