Sunday, March 3, 2024

The Beautiful Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke up this morning with rays of sunlight through my window
As I was going to work,
There was no tall building to block the sunshine
The wonderful rays penetrated my skin
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Timber Koleden 03 October 2025

A magnificent poem, well expressing the wonderful day that you experienced! What heart-spoken piece! Wonderfully written!

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Rob Lamberton 16 August 2025

Is this the Mount Etna in Italy?

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2025

Filled with such heart, beauty, and wonder! .. So magnificently sketched! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Koffi B Sossou 17 March 2025

Thank you, Rebecca. There are little things that make our day, we just don't notice them sometimes.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2025

Beautifully, beautifully, shared! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2024

A beautiful poem vividly depicting a wonderful day adorned with crystalline images. It resonates with me as regards childhood memories. So well crafted and expressed.

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Koffi B Sossou 10 May 2024

Thanks Rose. I wish i could go back in days to enjoy these unique moments of childhood.

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Sossou Foyovo 07 March 2024

Childhood...hmmm

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Koffi B Sossou 03 March 2024

The day was just beautiful.

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