Wednesday, August 23, 2017

The Beating Heart Comments

Rating: ★4.8

My heart was beating so hard
And I couldn't sleep
I checked it with him
So he took it out to repair
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Rini Shibu
heart sleep
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2017

Heart's love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 27 August 2017

Thank you so much Edward. Rini

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Kishore Kumar Das 25 August 2017

Sleep......when heartbeat is normal.....and how will it be normal......love is the medicine.......nice poetic prescription..

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Rini Shibu 25 August 2017

Thank you so much Kishore...

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Nosheen Irfan 24 August 2017

A lovely write. Interlocked in love, hearts experience bliss.

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Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Thanks Nosheen Rini

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Liza Sudina 23 August 2017

Interwoven hearts! How wonderful! As a fairytale! ! !

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Rini Shibu 23 August 2017

Thanks for reading Liza, I am glad that you liked it

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Mark Otieno 23 August 2017

Wow! Love is all about trust

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Rini Shibu 23 August 2017

Mark you are right it's all about trust

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 August 2017

I checked it with him So he took it out to repair And never returned He locked it safely in his heart And lost the key How can I break his heart Beautiful poem dear poetess. Thanks for sharing it.10 for it.

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Rini Shibu 23 August 2017

Thank you so much Subhas, I appreciate

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