Saturday, May 21, 2005

The Beast Within Comments

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We who live upon this Earth
Descended from a common Source
Since Life Began
(Including Man)
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Egal Bohen
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Monica Engeler 22 May 2005

Really like what your saying here. Hope we never see the end of man kind like your saying here. This would be better in free verse. You don't have to rhyme that way. Easier to write poetry.Otherwise like the meaning in it.

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