The Beast Within Me Comments

I give The Beast Within Me: five stars *****

'It is not prisoned or chained' I say: use 'imprisoned'. I especially like 'Return what you have taken, and you will be forgiven, Give me back my smile, my joy, my vibrance, And you need not to suffer from darkness; '

'He could bring inferno and toast spirits; ' I would type 'an inferno'. By 'toast', do you mean 'make into toast' or 'an act of proposing a drink in honor of or of drinking in honor of someone or something'? ?