Tuesday, January 31, 2012

The Beast Within Comments

Rating: 3.5

I feel I am stuck in a cage every now and then someone pokes me stirring up more rage being hurt and can't escape, Once I feel happy things don't stay, You didn't do this, You didn't do that, Grow up, I'm smarter than you, Do as I say, Shut your mouth or you will pay everything I do has to be my way. I close my
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Connor Whyte
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Bella Hernandez 08 February 2012

wow.... the beast within wanting to be free, but cannot for the fear of thee would lose control of me then everyone can see the beast which is me small lil thing for this lovely beastly poem ~Bella

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Aria Quimby 31 January 2012

holy cranberry.....thats really good, just one suggestions, try spacing it out it makes it easier to read, but that was amazing

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