Wednesday, November 4, 2009

The Beast That I Am Comments

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music fades
melody
smiles haunt me
swift glaces
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Erika Michelle
fog
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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 November 2009

you are really now in a very fantastic creative phase. Try to enjoy your beastlyness and write more to destroy your small igo which punishes you through such foggy realisation. your friend afar stay strict in writing. 4.11.09

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Jack Williams 04 November 2009

Pretty cool poem. I think you might be missing an 'S', in the 7th line.

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