The Beast Of Darkness Comments

The clouds passed by in dark array as the hours went along. Until the ending of the day and the birds had stopped their song.-----Awesome

Very nicely written Alan. I love the rhyme scheme as well. Beautiful darkness I would say. I give this a 10+++.

Fear so beautifully painted on the canvas of a nice poem, so delicately crafted. Full of mysteries and so lovely imageries. Thanks Alan for the sharing. 10+++++

Very atmospheric with a delightful ending with great rhyming and a beautiful flow to the poem!

The beasts of darkness are grasping all in their poisonous claws to kill all beings and to destroy all things, ......... you have exactly drawn the modern crazy society's picture, ........... thanks for sharing, ++++++++ 10 We want no darkness but light.................... for this slogan no leader.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...... Sorry, ......... You may read my poem, Darkness In The Modern World (Stanza)

It unfolds like a tale of suspense and mystery. Quite gripping. Thanks.

The gate was covered in brambles and the grass was knee high deep. Clouds passed in dark array. An amazing sharing is done here. Fear is wisely presented in this poem...10