Sunday, January 28, 2007

The Beast In You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trapped beneath your arms,
Cant you see the terror in my eyes,
You’re hurting me,
But you’re clever,
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Jade Baker
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David Harris 28 January 2007

Jade you have really written a striking poem about the kind of love no one ever wants to taste. In rings so true. Another sad poem, but still a lovely poem just the same. Keep writing my friend and don't ever give up. Thanks for sharing it. David

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