The Beast Comments

Sounds like it is based on a true story. If not, you've the makings of a novel. -chuck

An abstract that I can relate to! I, at one time, was troubled by a beast; just not this particular one. These type of beast', I believe, are sometimes worse than the God-made earthly beasts! ! ! ! !

Sometimes, a mother can not see because she herself, by the beast is blinded. Sometimes, a mother cannot see because she is undermined by strife. Sometimes, a mother cannot see because her love is across her eyes. Sometimes, a mother does see, and her face is stained as she cries. Sometimes, a mother is tied in knots and held captive in a world you cannot see Sometimes, a mother is so afraid of living that she steals the truth and hides from thee. Sometimes, a mother can see, and she dies each day as she is bound. Sometimes, a mother can see, and she cries each as she hears the sounds.

sounds very spiritual..what faith are you?

An abstract poem which i understood as related to dope. Is it?

A wonderfully crafted sur-realistic picture in words. Great....

Very passionate, you continue to deliver with amazing poetry.

This beast has claimed innumerable lives. Well written David, excellent piece.

Beasts never realise some acts which renders them so can never be condoned...the mother supports the son may be but not the beast.She cannot think she reared beasts up though not in beastly manner.....very good and poignant write....thoughts in Brownian motion to grip this beast, ..Well done Sir..

Beasts never realise some acts which renders them so can never be condoned...the mother supports the son may be but not the beast.She cannot think she reared beasts up though not in beastly manner.....very good and poignant write....thoughts in Brownian motion to grip this beast, ..Well done Sir..

very powerful and thought provoking..you are a great, expressive poet...already have 2 of urs on my favourites list! Great write, thanx for invite! SG

and in the end it is we that are judged by our actions! good poem!