The Bearer Of Your Rejection Comments

it sounds like there are TWO people? with problems in this poem! i like it but maybe it was good that the TWO did not hit it off. i would have pitied any children they might produce. nice rhyming. i wonder if MY one-and-only is waiting for me on some other planet or an asteroid, a meteor, a moon, or a star. hmmm? her/its loss! ! ! hee-hee. bri :) i take what i can find right here on Earth!

This is such an amazing poem though soaked in extreme pessimism. If the efforts listed by you were tried by someone else, the detractor would started dancing on his head. Any way, I enjoyed it. But please don't try the stunts mentioned in the concluding lines. Thanks. But there's nothing to see there, just an empty, cold, dark stare. and so I must now be the bearer of your rejection.