Friday, October 23, 2015

The Bear (Forgiveness) Comments

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There is a bear upon my bed,
Fur white and pure, but dark within
There it sits, black eyes staring
Into empty corners hid
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Hanna Maria
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Fabrizio Frosini 23 October 2015

I turn, and there she stands A sister who has wronged me The bear is gone my eyes reveal As she pulls me near and says ‘I’m sorry’ :) well.. through your poem you managed to make her.. apologize.. ;) ''yet I forgave her anyways.'' and it was the good thing to do, for sure.. :) blessings

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