A young black crow liked to enter the lair,
Of a large grizzly brown bear,
In the hope of some fruit,
Or other tasty loot.
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After reading a couple of your poems I am tempted to think you work at the zoo or sleep there.... Then I came to myself to realise that I love animals too: fishes, birds and squirrels are my friends.... You write excellently well. God bless you
WOW ' such a lovely poem Ketona - it won my heart. Beautiful ending with a love and helping attitude. Had this world be so nice We all would have been leading a peaceful life......
Silly bird, he said with a sigh. This reaction of the bear is so cute! A lovely story very imaginatively told, Stephen! I love the way you have ended the story with a great message! If Vali the bear could speak, He'd tell us all to help the weak. Greatly enjoyed!
.......ohhh I love this....this is so perfect....I loved reading every line....and this wonderful poem gave me a big smile....adding to my favourite collection...
A wonderful lesson in this one. Sometimes the unexpected can happen. Love your narrative poems.