The Beacon Comments

this beacon of poetic lines is the melody of each true soul that ryhmes and you are surely that true soul

SIGNAL OF LOVE... WHAT A BFUL FORM OF EXPRESSION :)

'Make me a beacon that will end sorrow's darkness by flooding light of happiness and act as a signal of love! ' 10 for this moving composition. Marvelous.

wonderfull use of imagery....quite a heartfelt plea...great work

Very inspiring to the souls of men...

the light of soul hidden inside broought out with sheer pride!

Excellent, Koyel: realistic yet hopeful, crafted beautifully - has to be a 10.

Hi Koyel. A beacon of hope and leading the way to ever greater things must be better than anything else. well done. Regards Dave T.

loved you train of thought although I would be a cup to hold water myself

This is a very good piece, well penned indeed 10/10 regards Tom

This is a wonderful poem and a Beacon itself, of poetry. A 10. GW62

Great poem. very well structured and beautifully worded....excellent stuff....10

wise wish! beautifully expressed words...

A beautiful prayer. Where there is light, darkness must fade away. Kind regards, Sandra

a good poe on existence

...words emitting here thoughts and love...........10

I enjoyed this poem lots, for I am a potter...congrats to you!

good a very nice composition.

it's an amazing poem, it was just a wonderful piece..i loved it, it's a 10! ~Hazel G.E

I liked everything about this. From start to end, it was all great! ! !