The Beach House Comments

The sifting sands beneath our feet-how sublime and subtle the undulating current of your words, the sense of growing loss, depiction of the outward serenity and the inward displacement of a relationship ending....and of the unconsciousness of it all, at the time. I feel sad now thinking of how hard it was, for you, to bear this....and I know. P

Love this.keep on writing.

nice poem, keep writing..........