Saturday, December 8, 2018

The Beach By Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ocean stole the beaches memories
washed away the footprints and castles of children
beneath the full moon each wave came
rose up and down the beach
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Matthew Holloway
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Carl Roussell 10 December 2018

The opening line is so cool - it draws you into the rest of the poem. A 10 for sure

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Matthew Holloway 11 December 2018

thanks again, I was really pleased with this poem and in particular the opening few lines

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Nash Thomas 09 December 2018

Your writing is beautiful. Your poems are beautiful. All are like artistically planted roses in the rose garden. You must read An Autobiography by Jawaharlal Nehru. Your destiny will change and you will become a man to catch men in life through words

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Matthew Holloway 09 December 2018

thank you I am blown away by your comment, I will look up your suggestion.

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Jennifer Birchall 08 December 2018

What a wonderful poem Matthew, what an imagination you have.

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Matthew Holloway 08 December 2018

thank you jenny inspiration comes in many different and wonderful ways, thank you

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Matthew Holloway

Matthew Holloway

Cheshire, England
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