The ocean stole the beaches memories
washed away the footprints and castles of children
beneath the full moon each wave came
rose up and down the beach
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Your writing is beautiful. Your poems are beautiful. All are like artistically planted roses in the rose garden. You must read An Autobiography by Jawaharlal Nehru. Your destiny will change and you will become a man to catch men in life through words
thank you I am blown away by your comment, I will look up your suggestion.
What a wonderful poem Matthew, what an imagination you have.
thank you jenny inspiration comes in many different and wonderful ways, thank you
The opening line is so cool - it draws you into the rest of the poem. A 10 for sure
thanks again, I was really pleased with this poem and in particular the opening few lines