Wednesday, June 5, 2019

The Beach Comments

Rating: 4.8

On the beach is a small dirty patch
It contains all the darkness of your past
All the bitterness, hurt, pain, hate you feel
All the sadness, guilt, shame and hopelessness
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Jennifer Birchall
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Matthew Holloway 06 June 2019

An interesting concept write to remain amongst all the wash up debris of life or to stroll to cleaner waters

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Lyn Paul 05 June 2019

A poignant write. Too, making that choice to leave it all behind. Often so very hard though the beach itself is a true healer. Through our lives we take on many challenges and deal with so much heartache. So letting go of the darkness should be a new breath for life. Thank you

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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