Wednesday, March 29, 2017

The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are times our inner man longs for the beach.
It craves for Salah moments, beautiful and peaceful.
Living near the waters would be my hearts delight.
Such a place would mean waking up in the wee hours of the morning.
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Jeanette Telusma
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White Tiger 09 February 2018

Yes, the beauty of the open sea is unmatched. The creators imagination is unmatched. A wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 11 February 2018

I totally agree..... thank you so much for your time and comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

The beauty of nature is really fantastic and the creator is magnificent. And dear Jeanette, the depiction you made is heart touching. Let me quote.... Living near the waters would be my hearts delight. Such a place would mean waking up in the wee hours of the morning. I would sit and breath in the fresh air that engulfs the atmosphere. I would gaze into the distance of the sea pass the horizon. Imagine walking until you reach where the sky and sea meets. Beautiful poem.

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Jeanette Telusma 10 November 2017

Thanks for your time and kind comment, Mr. Kumar. Blessings to you always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2017

This is where i pen away! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jeanette Telusma 05 August 2017

Yes, Edward, it's the best place to pen away. Thanks for commenting.

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