The Beach.... Comments

When the biggest truth is revealed the illusions appeared like foot prints are washed away. A nice poem.

This is a nice poem. I have rated it 9/10. 'A cool.. but a bit salty breeze.. blows... At times bringing the scent of the ship that just left.... ' Nice depiction.

To be remembered is to write poems that soothes the soul, this is like a footprint that can not be wash away!

A soft, soothing poem like a cool breeze.

vryy nice.description... good to read it..... i invite u to read my poetries..........