Thursday, November 12, 2009

The Beach Comments

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I walk into a big place
I see the bright sky
I was walking
The sun was coming out from the sky
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Ashmita Kamlesh
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Saadat Tahir 26 November 2009

did some theorising and then setteled for a simple explanation the poem is just exactly what it appears simple lovely and charming.... cheers

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Eyan Desir 20 November 2009

This reminds me I must go on the beach..thank you

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