Monday, May 26, 2008

The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mountain hides it's partner road from view.
The winding roads so tight,
Teasing beach views on the drive in, seagulls calling our arrival whilst in full flight.
The sand warm and inviting,
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Julia West (julesx 64)
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 May 2008

There are some words in this piece that need to be examined but the work itself, is complete and whole. I would change nothing in presentation. A beautiful piece of writing.Thanks. GW62

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Julia West (julesx 64)

Julia West (julesx 64)

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