Friday, December 21, 2007

The Beach Comments

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We walked on the sand near the ocean
The waves touched my feet
The water was cool
I held onto him.
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L. K. Thayer
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Alice Affi 07 June 2008

I love the last three lines especially

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Nomi Mas 16 February 2008

really sweet. vivid. felt i was there seeing it take place. thanks!

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Ramendra Kumar 25 December 2007

Soft and sweet and evocative!

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L. K. Thayer

L. K. Thayer

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