Friday, December 12, 2008

The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

WATER SPLASHING AGAINST THE ROCKS
PEOPLE WALKING LIKE SHEEP IN FLOCKS
SUN SHINING HIGH
WAVES WANTING TO FLY
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

It's beautiful poem, a natural one. I loved it. CP

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Luzaan, You painted a picture with your words and you rhymed it beautifully as well. Thank you for sharing. Karin Anderson

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