Wednesday, July 15, 2009

**the Bazaar* Comments

Rating: 3.3

The night was too dark
Some howling owls in the bushes
I raised my hands with eyes open
To wrap the black into my lap
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Rakesh Bedi 15 July 2009

An inbuilt knack in tackling the descriptions in the poet is quite clear, good job!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 15 July 2009

mind blowing script Mr. Khan... n i loved the subject. u portrayed the idea vividly..

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

You have painted a wonderful portrait in a blank canvas painting a very detailed picturesque...Great! ! ! 10

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Sandra Martyres 15 July 2009

you paint a very vivid and artistic picture with this beautiful poem Sadiqullah 10

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Reshma Ramesh 15 July 2009

beautiful sadiq......the best part of the poem is that u paint a picture where u are standing back and watching everything.........and it is like we are standing beside you watching this baazar in peshawar.......

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wonderful, touching, whispering peom..loved it

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