Thursday, June 1, 2017

The Battles Within My Mind Comments

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They say that you can see a man's soul through his eyes, but what if they put up a camouflage. Their happiness and joy are designed to disguise the pain and sorrow built up inside.

With a smile on their face, they awaken to suffer through another day. Realizing that gloom and sorrow is just a cornor away. Hoping and praying that one day it would all go away.
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2017

A sublime poetic conflict. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

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Craig Mize

Craig Mize

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