The Battle Of Pompous Prigs Comments

OUTSTANDING WORK, DEANNA...THIS WHY YOU GOTTA KEEP THAT PEN A' PUMPIN' REGULARLY....THIS PIECE HAS ALL THE VIRTUOUS QUALITIES OF POETRY..WELL CONSTRUCTED...TIGHT AND FLOWING LIKE A MILD WATERFALL INTO A STREAM...GREAT RHYMING & SUPERIOR WRITTEN INTERACTION...FRANK

Deanna, after reading your poetry, It would be crazy to duel wits with you... wear that crown proudly! ! Brian

superlatively written - sounds as if it could be part of a modern Greek tragedy with the humor & the lofty lanuage.