The Battle Of Life Comments

but don't you ever lose your faith because our god is always there when the slaves need help all you've got to do is pray don't let weakness take over you you can be stronger than that if it's called cancer, then you can be the whale great and good verses..great lines..meaningful... poemis really a rich and explanatory one.. with satsifactory flow.... well doen dear poet...10++++++++

Battle is a must for life. Surprisingly, all of living creature trying to live long here but all faces an ending! Your poem is finely composed. I liked it

perfect is nothing compared to your choice in selecting the right words I really liked it and thanks for ur comment God bless you

lovely way of installing courage and confdence in a starking patient yet dying by the hope of cure, when ruefully losing day by day, as i lost my lovely sister and sister in-law before me one after another so painfully inspite of best possible treatment of modern world of medication, alas! ! ! , anyhow this the faith that has to be incalcated in the mind of the patiece, , , , , , , I the faith therapy as...I MUST LIVE, , great write, I do admire 10/10, thanks for sharing