The Battle Of A Day Along The Railway Comments

Thanks for this touching write that reminds us me that I can never really cut myself off from others hard lives, even though I think I'm cruising along in a bubble.

I liked the following stanza-When will this journey of the old mother Be over? When will the empty bag be fulfilled With the pieces of the picked-up coal?

A very heart touching write full of empathy.

nicely dlineated the struggling of life