Sunday, December 2, 2018

The Battle Comments

Rating: 5.0

We never stood a chance really
Doomed from the very start
The Calvary came at us full force
We were in our shelter
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Jennifer Birchall
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Penny Simpson 13 February 2019

Such resilience, ending in sadness. I’m sorry the battle could never be won x

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Hassan Hayati 24 December 2018

I think yes. the war has no winner,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2018

Dear Jennifer, such a well wriiten poem...................

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Matthew Holloway 02 December 2018

very well written great use of visual ideas

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2018

The poem brings to fore the horrors of war. Out of two warring sides, only one can win. Thanks.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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