Saturday, April 19, 2008

The Battle Comments

Rating: 5.0

A daily struggle they fight
Not knowing how or why
Tying to overcome the loneliness of the night
Nor understanding why they should even try
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Patricia Gale
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Thad Wilk 19 April 2008

Great read Patricia, expressed beautifully! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

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Abha Sharma 19 April 2008

the darkness of the depression has to be fought bravely... deep insight of the mind is revealed.. good composition.

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Danny Reynolds 19 April 2008

Wonderful sentiments Patricia, and well written.

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